Kahikatea hub has been learning about plants including the parts of and what is needed to look after plants.
For our task this afternoon, we started sketches of different plants by our hub. Miss Gallagher had a turn at creating a sketch.
We are going to practise giving each other feedback about our designs by commenting on each others art, by commenting on our blogs.
Please leave some positive, thoughtful and helpful comments about my drawing.

Ms Ghent said: she liked how my branches looked realistic because I included knots. She thinks that I could improve my adding leaves and shading.
ReplyDeleteIt looks amazing! and really cool but...
ReplyDeleteI think though you should start from the bottom and then up to improve the surface of the drawing
hi miss gallaher i love your work a lot it is really cool there is nothing you need to change about it or make it better or cooler
ReplyDeletei love how you sketched lightly instead of drawing dark and/or hardly
ReplyDeletewow that looks really cool it would look cooler if you put the leaves on it.
ReplyDeletemiss g I like your tree because the brasher are not straight next time you
ReplyDeletecould put some leaves on the brasher.
i liek haw a you jow the tree a
ReplyDeleteMaybe just draw the leaves but other than that its REALLY COOL
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